Chelsea,
Assuming you've not been heavily, professionally edited (more than minor, easily overlooked grammatical and punctuation errors, etc.) and didn't boot-leg / lift / plagiarize, I have only this to say.

If LNP had any sense, they'd pay for your formal education in Journalism, English Lit. and/or Writing and Composition, etc., and then hire you as their solitary writer/editor, though you already compose a far superior article (ok, book review) to any of their writing staff.

Good luck in whatever you pursue, noting, that if it's a career involving writing, you can 'write' your ticket.

Chelsea was the valedictorian at Penn Manor and currently attends Harvard University. She probably didn't need to be edited at all.

I, too, was impressed with the quality of her review as well as the points she raises about Charlotte Simmons.